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Post Icon Posted: Oct 19th, 2005 at 11:32 am

lets get this rolling

5:32am

*The sun rises in an ash coloured sky, painting it with fire and blood washing the grey city of Nicosia with colour once more*

7:00am
*The doors of the new town police department, and a lone figure hurries out into the street its brown jacket limping in the breeze, rounding the corner the figure bumps into someone apologises and hurries on out of sight of who they bumped into*[/b]
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[color=yellow][b] so who got bumped?
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Post Icon Posted: Jan 26th, 2006 at 03:33 pm

*Athena looks after the lone figure momentarily and mutters under her breath about people always being in a rush these days. She continues her route into the new police station as she quickly tries to put a story together of how her purse was stolen. The true story of how her clothes were lying on the ground while she hunted and fed quite a away wouldn't go down too well, or so well that she would end up in a padded room.*

*Opening the clean glass doors she stepped inside the building and took a good look around taking things in at a glance before heading over to the reception desk.*

*The lady behind the desk was a petite, pretty blue eued, blonde haired who from the looks of it was one that had crossed over the generalised lines of blondes being dumb and entered into the smart section.*

Hello there Miss, how can I help you?

*The womans voice was tad higher than usural causing Athena to wince ever so slightly the heightened hearing now bringing another ear piercing pain.*

Hiya I would like to report that my purse has been stolen in the early hours of this morning.

*The receptionist passes over a clipboard and pen.*

Give as much detail as you can and I'll get you seen when I can.

*Athena takes both board and pen in hand and takes one of the lightly cushioned seats just in front of the desk.*

*About fiftheen minutes later she finishes the form giveing as much detail as possible, well minus a couple of thing such as she was feeding and was covered from head to foot in fur. Standing up she quickly checks over the form and passes it over to the receptionist.*

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Post Icon Posted: Jan 27th, 2006 at 04:55 pm

*With a quick glance at the form the woman asks Athena to take a seat again, and paces off out the office door*

*a few moments later a tall afro-american detective approached Athena, with a smile and says*

"if youll follow me miss.."
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Post Icon Posted: Jan 27th, 2006 at 05:03 pm

*Athena quickly stands up and begins to follow the detective. Quite surprised by the fact that he was a couple of inches taller than her.*

My name is Athena.

*The detective leads her off into a quiet office set a little apart from the hustle bustle of the main section. He indicates for her to take one of the chairs of the two in the office. Which she does again taking a quick look around the room taking in the minimum mess and small pile of paper work on his desk and thinks that with such a little work load that's why he was able to see her so fast.*

Have you read the form I filled in? Or do you wish to talk to me about what has happened first?
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Post Icon Posted: Jun 29th, 2006 at 12:12 pm

*offering a freindly smile the Detective laces his fingers and leans forward resting his forearms on the desk*

If you would, I can assure you *another freindly smile* I do read what people can be botherd writing but their own words can give a better idea
of a situation *gestures for her to begin when shes ready with his left hand*
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Post Icon Posted: Jul 16th, 2006 at 09:21 pm

*Her eye brows raised high and fast briefly pausing before responding to the officer slightly thrown off something hinted at her that she has to be extra careful about how she said and explainedthe situation or that padded room might not be too far in her future.*

As I have stated in the report I was walking though the out skirts of the city I turned the corner and bumped into a person who appeared to be in a rush. He apologised and made sure I was steady onmy feet before carrying on when I checked my pocket for my purse it had gone.

*She keep's her eyes focused on him, looking as neutral as possible.*
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Post Icon Posted: Aug 4th, 2007 at 09:55 am

*The detective sighed quietly as he leaned back a little more, causing the new leather chair to squeak slightly as his weight moved against the dark fabric.*

That is very little detail miss, for example what did the man look like. You must of been able to get a good look at him if you were that close. What time did this happen? Why did you not report it sooner?

Is there anything of value in it? Anything that would be rather expensive and valuable to perhaps a jewelers?

Does it have any identification of yours in?

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